[AfriNIC-rpd] incentive for AFPUB-2010-v4-001

[ALAIN AINA]

On Jun 23, 2010, at 11:55 AM, Douglas Onyango wrote:

> Hello Allan et al,
> Thanks for the text - I think that Mark's input makes the document more encompassing and easier to understand.
> 
> I am incorporating it with Mark's revision unless you have a problem with that.


Mark makes it  better. Go ahead

--alain

> 
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> 
> --- On Wed, 6/23/10, Mark Elkins <mje at posix.co.za> wrote:
> 
> From: Mark Elkins <mje at posix.co.za>
> Subject: Re: [AfriNIC-rpd] incentive for AFPUB-2010-v4-001
> To: "AfriNIC Resource Policy Discussion List" <rpd at afrinic.net>
> Date: Wednesday, June 23, 2010, 9:44 AM
> 
> On Tue, 2010-06-22 at 23:54 +0000, ALAIN AINA wrote:
>> Hi all,
>> 
>> During the Policy discussion, i promised to send text for the incentive of the policy.
>> 
>> The current incentive says :
>> 
>> "In order to ensure a smooth transition from IPv4 to IPv6, the lifespan of IPv4 can be increased in order to give network operators more time to make the transition. This document proposes a strategy for allocation and maintenance of AfriNIC's final /8 block of IPv4 from IANA."
>> 
>> I suggest the following:
>> 
>> 
>> "In order to ensure a smooth transition  to IPv6,  AfriNIC's  pool  should be managed to give  old members as well as new members routable blocks  after the IPv4  pool is depleted,  in order to maintain and deploy IPv4 networks while deploying  native IPv6 networks  during  a gradual transition to IPv6.
>> 
>> This document proposes a strategy for allocation and maintenance of AfriNIC's final /8 block of IPv4 from IANA."
> 
> I believe the goal was to remove the 'increasing the lifespan of IPv4'
> and the rewording does just that. Cool.
> I might simplify "AfriNIC's pool should be managed to give old members
> as well as new members routable blocks" simply to "AfriNIC's pool
> should be managed to be able to provide members routable blocks".
> -and-
> "while deploying  native IPv6 networks" could simply be "while deploying
> IPv6 networks"...
> 
> 
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