<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=us-ascii"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" class=""><div class="">None of the changes address any of my previous comments, so they all still stand and are included</div><div class="">here by reference.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div>In this version 5.7.3.1 is irrational<br class=""><div><br class=""></div><div>In every other RIR, the source of a transfer is required to be in compliance with the policies of the source RIR.</div><div>It does not make sense to impose the policies of the receiving RIR on the source of a transfer.</div><div><br class=""></div><div>5.7.4.1 is absurdly worded as a meandering run-on sentence. Instead, I propose:</div><blockquote style="margin: 0 0 0 40px; border: none; padding: 0px;" class=""><div>5.7.4.1<span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space:pre"> </span>Transfer recipients in the AFRINIC region must demonstrate need according to existing</div></blockquote><blockquote style="margin: 0 0 0 40px; border: none; padding: 0px;" class=""><blockquote style="margin: 0 0 0 40px; border: none; padding: 0px;" class=""><blockquote style="margin: 0 0 0 40px; border: none; padding: 0px;" class=""><div>AFRINIC policies in the same manner as if the resources were to be received from</div><div>the AFRINIC free pool. Transfer recipients in another RIR must comply with the</div><div>recipient policies of that RIR.</div></blockquote></blockquote></blockquote><div class=""><br class=""></div>5.7.4.3 is bolded, yet it contains the exact same language as the existing policy.<div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">5.7.5 attempts to invent a new process wheel and is overly specific about the actions required. I suggest</div><div class="">that we leave this issue to staff as an implementation detail and business practice and that they work</div><div class="">with the other RIRs which have well established and well functioning processes for these transfers</div><div class="">already. There is no need to reinvent the wheel. It is perfectly round and rolls nicely in 4 RIRs already.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Owen</div><div class=""><br class=""><div><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On Aug 18, 2020, at 00:57 , Moses Serugo <<a href="mailto:moses.serugo@gmail.com" class="">moses.serugo@gmail.com</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:trebuchet ms,sans-serif;font-size:small;color:#000099">
<span class="">Hello PDWG Members,<span class=""></span></span><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><span class=""> </span><span class=""><br class=""></span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><span class="">We have received a new version of policy Proposal
- </span>Resource Transfer Policy (Draft-2)<span class="">/</span>AFPUB-2019-V4-003-DRAFT02<span class=""> from
authors Anthony Ikechukwu Ubah and Taiwo Oyewande<span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif" class=""></span>. The proposal contents are published at:
<a href="https://afrinic.net/policy/proposals/2019-v4-003-d2" class="">https://afrinic.net/policy/proposals/2019-v4-003-d2</a><br class=""></span><span class=""><span class=""></span></span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><span class=""><br class=""><span class=""></span></span></div>P<span class="">lease take some time to go through the
proposal contents and provide your feedback. <br class=""></span></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:trebuchet ms,sans-serif;font-size:small;color:#000099"><span class=""><br class=""></span></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:trebuchet ms,sans-serif;font-size:small;color:#000099"><span class="">Regards,</span></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:trebuchet ms,sans-serif;font-size:small;color:#000099"><span class=""><br class=""></span></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:trebuchet ms,sans-serif;font-size:small;color:#000099"><span class="">Moses Serugo</span></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:trebuchet ms,sans-serif;font-size:small;color:#000099"><span class=""><br class=""></span></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:trebuchet ms,sans-serif;font-size:small;color:#000099"><span class="">PDWG Co-Chair.<br class=""></span>
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