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<td>[Icp2-review] Comments on latest version of ICT-2 draft</td>
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<td>Fri, 25 Apr 2025 08:22:19 -0500</td>
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<td>Seun Ojedeji <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:seun.ojedeji@gmail.com"><seun.ojedeji@gmail.com></a></td>
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<div>Hello,
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<div>I like to suggest 2 minor modifications to the draft:</div>
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<div>Section 2.3b Derecognition<br>
- I believe the subject RIR where applicable should be given
the opportunity to transparently respond to the proposal
which should then be put into consideration by the rest of
the RIRs in their decision making prior to it getting to
ICANN level. The opportunity given under section 2.3c(i)
would rather be a second attempt and not the first and only.
So i suggest a wording similar to below:<br>
"Where applicable the subject RIR may provide a response
within 7 days of publication of the proposal on why it
should not be derecognised"<br>
This needs to occur prior to section 2bii<br>
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Section 2.5 Coordination Limitation<br>
- It will be good to put a wording that clearly states that
each region will have at least a functioning RIR. A wording
similar to below can be added to the statement in section
2.5:<br>
"However each region shall have at least 1 Internet
Registry.<br>
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Alternatively. A new line can be introduced under section
2.3b with wording similar to below:<br>
"Should the subject RIR be derecognised, effort shall be
made by the rest of the RIRs and ICANN to ensure a new
entity from within the region is promptly recognised<br>
to serve the region affected"<br>
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A timeline can also be added to the above text if necessary.<br>
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<i><span style="color:rgb(0,102,0)">Seun
Ojedeji,<br style="color:rgb(0,102,0)">
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style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">Bringing
another down does not take you up - think
about your action!<br>
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