<html><body><div style="color:#000; background-color:#fff; font-family:times new roman, new york, times, serif;font-size:16px"><div dir="ltr" id="yui_3_16_0_1_1421049131737_30374"><span id="yui_3_16_0_1_1421049131737_30536">I support the proposal</span></div><div dir="ltr" id="yui_3_16_0_1_1421049131737_30374" class="" style="">My only comment is on the word "Founded" in XXXX" section I.B. </div><div dir="ltr" id="yui_3_16_0_1_1421049131737_30374" class="" style=""><br class="" style=""></div><div dir="ltr" id="yui_3_16_0_1_1421049131737_30374" class="" style="">It's written "AFRINIC Serving Africa Founded in 2005", For me It sounds good to read: "<span style="font-size: 16px;" id="yui_3_16_0_1_1421049131737_30678">AFRINIC Serving Africa accredited by ICANN in 2005".</span></div><div dir="ltr" id="yui_3_16_0_1_1421049131737_30374" class="" style=""><span style="font-size: 16px;">And the </span><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="yui_3_16_0_1_1421049131737_30680">same update with the other RIR into this section ???</span></div><div dir="ltr" id="yui_3_16_0_1_1421049131737_30374" class="" style=""><span style="font-size: 16px;"><br></span></div><div dir="ltr" id="yui_3_16_0_1_1421049131737_30374" class="" style=""><span style="font-size: 16px;">/Janvier Ngnoulaye</span></div><br> <div style="font-family: times new roman, new york, times, serif; font-size: 16px;" id="yui_3_16_0_1_1421049131737_30372"> <div style="font-family: HelveticaNeue, Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, Lucida Grande, sans-serif; font-size: 16px;" id="yui_3_16_0_1_1421049131737_30371"> <div dir="ltr" id="yui_3_16_0_1_1421049131737_30370"> <hr size="1"> <font size="2" face="Arial" id="yui_3_16_0_1_1421049131737_30373"> <b><span style="font-weight:bold;">De :</span></b> Alan Barrett <apb@cequrux.com><br> <b><span style="font-weight: bold;">À :</span></b> africann@afrinic.net <br> <b><span style="font-weight: bold;">Envoyé le :</span></b> Lundi 12 janvier 2015 12h48<br> <b><span style="font-weight: bold;">Objet :</span></b> Re: [AfrICANN-discuss] Internet Number Community IANA Stewardship Proposal: Final Call for Comments<br> </font> </div> <div class="y_msg_container" id="yui_3_16_0_1_1421049131737_30965"><br>This is a reminder that today is the last day to provide comments<br clear="none">on the CRISP Team's draft proposal (see below).<br clear="none"><br clear="none">Even if you have no other comments, simply stating that you support the<br clear="none">proposal would be useful.<br clear="none"><br clear="none">-- Alan Barrett, member of the CRISP Team<br clear="none"><br clear="none">>----- Forwarded message from Izumi Okutani <<a shape="rect" ymailto="mailto:izumi@nic.ad.jp" href="mailto:izumi@nic.ad.jp">izumi@nic.ad.jp</a>> -----<br clear="none">><br clear="none">>Date: Fri, 09 Jan 2015 01:21:08 +0900<br clear="none">>From: Izumi Okutani <<a shape="rect" ymailto="mailto:izumi@nic.ad.jp" href="mailto:izumi@nic.ad.jp">izumi@nic.ad.jp</a>><br clear="none">>To: "<a shape="rect" ymailto="mailto:ianaxfer@nro.net" href="mailto:ianaxfer@nro.net">ianaxfer@nro.net</a>" <<a shape="rect" ymailto="mailto:ianaxfer@nro.net" href="mailto:ianaxfer@nro.net">ianaxfer@nro.net</a>><br clear="none">>Subject: [NRO-IANAXFER] Internet Number Community IANA Stewardship Proposal:<br clear="none">> Final Call for Comments<br clear="none">><br clear="none">>Dear colleagues,<br clear="none">><br clear="none">><br clear="none">>Please find the second draft of the Internet numbers community's<br clear="none">>response to the Request For Proposals issued by the IANA Stewardship<br clear="none">>Coordination Group (ICG).<br clear="none">><br clear="none">>This draft has been prepared by the Consolidated RIR IANA Stewardship<br clear="none">>Proposal (CRISP) Team, with considerations of feedback received from the<br clear="none">>global community on <<a shape="rect" ymailto="mailto:ianaxfer@nro.net" href="mailto:ianaxfer@nro.net">ianaxfer@nro.net</a>> mailing list.<br clear="none">><br clear="none">>We have incorporated the following key points in the second draft:<br clear="none">><br clear="none">> - Additional description on contract details, review committee and<br clear="none">> intellectual property rights<br clear="none">> - Description revised on Section V. NITA Requirements and VI.<br clear="none">> Community Process for more clarity<br clear="none">> - No changes are made to key elements of the proposal<br clear="none">><br clear="none">>The CRISP Team have considered all comments expressed on<br clear="none">><<a shape="rect" ymailto="mailto:ianaxfer@nro.net" href="mailto:ianaxfer@nro.net">ianaxfer@nro.net</a>> mailing list before the deadline of 5th Jan 2015, and<br clear="none">>would now like to make the final call for comments from the global<br clear="none">>community on the draft proposal, before submitting to the ICG.<br clear="none">><br clear="none">>Second Draft proposal:<br clear="none">>------------------------<br clear="none">>Clean Version :<br clear="none">><<a shape="rect" href="http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft" target="_blank">http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft</a>><br clear="none">><br clear="none">>Redline Version:<br clear="none">><http:/www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft-change-control><br clear="none">><br clear="none">>The deadline for providing feedback: Mon, 12 January 2015 23:59 UTC<br clear="none">>Feedback should be sent to : <<a shape="rect" ymailto="mailto:ianaxfer@nro.net" href="mailto:ianaxfer@nro.net">ianaxfer@nro.net</a>> mailing list<br clear="none">><br clear="none">>Community Inputs Considered by the CRISP Team:<br clear="none">>------------------------------------------<br clear="none">>You can check the status of the issues raised by the community and<br clear="none">>proposed the CRISP Team positions at:<br clear="none">><br clear="none">> <<a shape="rect" href="http://www.nro.net/crisp-iana-xfer-summary-discussion-08012015" target="_blank">http://www.nro.net/crisp-iana-xfer-summary-discussion-08012015</a>><br clear="none">><br clear="none">>Key dates:<br clear="none">>-----------<br clear="none">> Second draft to be published : 8 Jan 2015<br clear="none">> Second draft comments close : 12 Jan 2015, 23:59 UTC<br clear="none">> Final proposal to be sent to ICG : 15 Jan 2015<br clear="none">><br clear="none">>How to Engage in Discussions:<br clear="none">>-----------------------------<br clear="none">> All global discussions, for the CRISP team to consider as community<br clear="none">> feedback, will be conducted at <<a shape="rect" ymailto="mailto:ianaxfer@nro.net" href="mailto:ianaxfer@nro.net">ianaxfer@nro.net</a>> mailing list.<br clear="none">> All the CRISP Team discussions are open to observers.<br clear="none">><br clear="none">>Next Step:<br clear="none">>-----------<br clear="none">> In developing the final draft based on further feedback, the CRISP<br clear="none">> Team will ensure it has completed considerations of all substantial<br clear="none">> issues raised by the global community, which are compiled in the<br clear="none">> published issues list. The proposal will only incorporate issues that<br clear="none">> the CRISP team believes have received consensus support from the<br clear="none">> community.<br clear="none">><br clear="none">>References:<br clear="none">>------------<br clear="none">>* Discussions by the CRISP Team<br clear="none">> Details of all the CRISP team's work to date, including recordings,<br clear="none">> minutes and agendas of all the CRISP Team teleconferences and a<br clear="none">> public archive of the internal CRISP team mailing list, are<br clear="none">> available at:<br clear="none">> <a shape="rect" href="https://nro.net/crisp-team" target="_blank">https://nro.net/crisp-team</a><br clear="none">><br clear="none">>* Other links:<br clear="none">> - The ICG request for proposals:<br clear="none">> <<a shape="rect" href="https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-3-2014-09-03-en" target="_blank">https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-3-2014-09-03-en</a>><br clear="none">><br clear="none">> - The IANA Stewardship Transition Discussion in each RIR region:<br clear="none">> <<a shape="rect" href="http://www.nro.net/timeline-engagement" target="_blank">http://www.nro.net/timeline-engagement</a>><br clear="none">><br clear="none">> - First Draft proposal (Edited version)<br clear="none">> <<a shape="rect" href="http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-first-draft-1-1" target="_blank">http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-first-draft-1-1</a>><br clear="none">><br clear="none">><br clear="none">>_______________________________________________<br clear="none">>ianaxfer mailing list<br clear="none">><a shape="rect" ymailto="mailto:ianaxfer@nro.net" href="mailto:ianaxfer@nro.net">ianaxfer@nro.net</a><br clear="none">><a shape="rect" href="https://www.nro.net/mailman/listinfo/ianaxfer" target="_blank">https://www.nro.net/mailman/listinfo/ianaxfer</a><br clear="none">><br clear="none">>----- End forwarded message -----<br clear="none">_______________________________________________<br clear="none">ianaoversight mailing list<br clear="none"><a shape="rect" ymailto="mailto:ianaoversight@afrinic.net" href="mailto:ianaoversight@afrinic.net">ianaoversight@afrinic.net</a><br clear="none"><a shape="rect" href="https://lists.afrinic.net/mailman/listinfo.cgi/ianaoversight" target="_blank">https://lists.afrinic.net/mailman/listinfo.cgi/ianaoversight</a><div class="qtdSeparateBR"><br><br></div><div class="yqt6539536653" id="yqtfd98822"><br clear="none">_______________________________________________<br clear="none">AfrICANN mailing list<br clear="none"><a shape="rect" ymailto="mailto:AfrICANN@afrinic.net" href="mailto:AfrICANN@afrinic.net">AfrICANN@afrinic.net</a><br clear="none"><a shape="rect" href="https://lists.afrinic.net/mailman/listinfo.cgi/africann" target="_blank">https://lists.afrinic.net/mailman/listinfo.cgi/africann</a><br clear="none"></div><br><br></div> </div> </div> </div></body></html>